Sunday, June 28, 2009

T3W1 Language Arts IT Lesson 1


The Perfect Father
















The Perfect Father
who accepts you
the perfect father
who protects you

The perfect father
what will you do?
but believe in him
and accept Him too

The perfect Father
who gave His life
The perfect Father
is found in Jesus Christ

The perfect Father
who knows your name
The perfect father
who will remain

The perfect Father
who lovingly guides
who wants to lead you
like a shepherd
and walk
by your side

The perfect Father
who listens and holds
The perfect Father
who gently consoles

The perfect Father
who changes you
by his Love and his kindness
and acceptance too

The perfect Father
who understands
This perfect Father
became a man

So that you could come
to personally know Him
and know there is a Father
who is out there my friend

There is a Father
who exist, your not dreaming

He's looking for you
while your searching for Him

He's found in Jesus Christ


Jesus answered, 'I am the way and the truth and the life
no one comes to the father except through me'
(The Holy Bible) John 14: 6

Debbie Bennett









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I like this poem because it shows that the poet is actually explaining that Jesus Christ is somehow 'a perfect father'. He uses examples of father's love to express his ideas, making the poem more interesting and easier to understand.

He reveals his wonderful style by explaining his unusual and unique themes and writing with techniques like another poet. I like this poem because he uses short simple phrases in the stanza to express his feelings. It is somewhat detailed.

The meaning of this poem is--In the world, Jesus is the 'father of life'. He is the perfect father in the world. He cares and loves the people in the world. There is a perfect father that exists. The poem reflects the love of a father, using the characteristics of a father to express most of his ideas.



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